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Band 3.5CEFR A2235 words

Some people prefer to spend their lives do you doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss boss this views and give your own opinion.

The essay addresses both views and states an opinion, but it suffers from severe grammatical and lexical breakdown, making it extremely difficult to follow. Sentence boundaries,...

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Prompt

Some people prefer to spend their lives do you doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss boss this views and give your own opinion.

Essay review

Annotated essay

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Some people enjoy with they routine due to they create a progress in their life and avoiding any thing new invlove a long term even if this something has a highly opportunity while several individual hate to fasten with routine. In this essay, I will discuss both veiw before presening my opinion.

To begin, Nowdays people always change depending on what they are intresting in at that time especially they have a giant impact which social media are focters change their habits such as me when I was changing my intresting and habits every month due to who I following famos people on social media platforms also as a younger generation I understand why they change because they have many attention in their life. For example, BBc has made an experiment 2020 about why people change their habits and they discover the facterests are social media platforms that means people change because who following.

In other hand, not changing is better method who have achived goals and purpose in their life or who now what they want in their life especially older people who are living without social media platforms or who already create thier life .

In conclusion, I recpect both points for anyone prefers to keeps their activity and those who want to try a new experience, But in my opinion I prefer to spend my live do the some things I like.

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Band & CEFR

Band 3.5

CEFR A2 · High

Assessment summary

The essay addresses both views and states an opinion, but it suffers from severe grammatical and lexical breakdown, making it extremely difficult to follow. Sentence boundaries, word forms, spelling, and subject-verb agreement are persistently flawed, resulting in low task fulfillment and a Band 3.5 level.

Scoring criteria

Task Response 4.0

Strengths

  • The writer attempts to address both sides of the prompt and provides a concluding opinion.

Weaknesses

  • Arguments are extremely undeveloped, disjointed, and lack clear reasoning.
  • Unsupported personal anecdotes and vague references replace academic support.

Although all parts of the prompt are mentioned briefly, the arguments are extremely rudimentary and lack adequate extension or clear reasoning.

Coherence & Cohesion 3.5

Strengths

  • Basic paragraph structure is attempted with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

Weaknesses

  • Overall progression is heavily disrupted by poor sentence boundaries and opaque referencing.
  • Cohesive devices are used awkwardly and repetitively.

The text lacks logical progression and clear paragraph internal coherence, requiring the reader to exert excessive effort to follow the argument.

Lexical Resource 4.0

Strengths

  • Some topic-related vocabulary such as 'social media platforms', 'routine', and 'experience' appears.

Weaknesses

  • Frequent spelling errors ('Nowdays', 'intresting', 'facters', 'recpect') and word formation issues.
  • Persistent awkward collocations and non-standard word choices.

Vocabulary is very limited and inaccurate, with frequent spelling mistakes and improper word forms impeding communication.

Grammar Range & Accuracy 3.0

Strengths

  • Simple clause structures are occasionally attempted.

Weaknesses

  • Pervasive grammatical errors including severe subject-verb agreement failures, tense inconsistency, and broken relative clauses.
  • Frequent run-on sentences and lack of basic punctuation control.

Grammatical accuracy is extremely low. Almost every sentence contains major structural errors, preventing the display of controlled complex structures.

Writing stats

Words
235
Paragraphs
4
Grammar issues
11
Lexical suggestions
6
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